Double page spread - Audience feedback.

AUDIENCE FEEDBACK:

• Jozefina: It looks really good, but too much writing. The images are good, it looks professional. The colours that you used are well selected and look good together. The colours link well with the girls shirt. I like the title and the background/layout. I think the side image could have been of her front more than her side; maybe a full image or her, not just her torso. 
• Lois: Your double page spread is really good and I can tell that you've put a lot of time and effort into it. I like the fact that your model is looking at the writing which directs readers to read it. There's nothing I would criticize about this double page spread, I really like it.
• Marwa: I like the layout of the text, image and title because it's different enough to intrigue the audience but still gives the feel of an Indie genre. I like the grey boxes used to separate the writing which has made it easier to read in comparison to without the boxes. The introduction short, precise and applies to the whole article(which is good). The page number and magazine logo look very professional too. The only thing which I think could do with improvement is the placing of the pull quote as it looks as though the letters are a bit squashed together. I also like how you used the direction to which the artist is looking to your advantage. 
• Neran: This is really good Eleni. It's clearly presented and readable. The colours go well together. I like the fonts that you have used as it helps the words stand out from the images. The images are well took, love the angle on the right hand side.